What the teacher said about the paper
I just want to address the abstract submitted for this week. The abstract needs more information about your study and less about the anticipated results. Include more information about your methods. You have outlined several different areas of exploration in your abstract.
1. to investigate the mental effects of covid-19 on American families.
2.Discuss about the correlation on the effects of social, financial, and economic effects caused by the coronavirus pandemic.
3.will investigate the mental effects
4. and find mechanisms
5. and interventions
6. .This research will identify the causes, impacts, and what can be done to ease mental baggage challenges
There is not a consistent message of what your study hopes to prove.
Take time to proofread your abstract; eliminate the contradictory or confusing statements.
Find an appropriate example of an abstract and notice the components. The abstract usually leads off with the type of study the researcher has designed.
The number of participants is obtainable, but the geographical area may be too large.
Work to see if you can address any of these issues with your abstract. An abstract can be written after the study have been designed