I only completed the rough draft so, I will go ahead and insert my proffesors feedback.
You can just like me as Dr. Schulz, the Junior should only be added if you write out my full name (Dr. William Schulz, Jr.)
I don’t understand footnotes 6, 7, and 8. Are these links to an online journal article? If so, they should be cited as follows: Patrick Wallis, Justin Colson, and David Chilosi, “Structural Change and Economic Growth in the British Economy before the Industrial Revolution, 1500-1800,” The journal of economic history (U.S. National Library of Medicine, September 2018), https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6420141/. (accessed 8 April, 2022).
Check the rest of your footnote citations to make sure that they conform to this format.
Check the paper rubric for formatting rules; for example, page numbers should be centered at the bottom of the page.
How are you tying in what you have so far to the United States and its law and government?
I’d like to see more citations from scholarly journals and/or books. The Encyclopedia Britannica, while better fact-checked than Wikipedia, is still basically just an encyclopedia, not really a scholarly journal article or book. Do you have your bibliography ready? I can review it for sources.
What you have here is a decent start, but you need a LOT of connecting material to demonstrate that this is a US government paper. I look forward to reading your final submission in which you make this connection.
I will go ahead, and attach my rough draft, and rubric thank you.
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